38th Poem: Dear Mister (2nd Version)
Dear Mister
Dear Mister,
I remember of our first meet, of our flower seeds, one that you had especially planted for me.
I remember of our first letters, of the awkward and hopeful lines of letters you wrote that day, the day when you said your love.
I remember of our first time together, watering the plant and spending days together side by side.
I remember of our first kiss when we love each other, when we became one.
I remember of your sweet whisper, spoken of love promised in eternity.
I remember of our smiles, our laughs and our kisses.
I remember of our love.
Dear Mister,
I remember of that day when I waited.
I remember of a windy day when I was alone.
I remember of nights spent alone and cold.
I remember of our plants grew steadily, anchoring my faith, my love
I remember of the first bud, so delicate yet so hopeful
I remember of the first flower, a white rose, pristine pure white.
Dear Mister,
I remember of loud noises, ticking clocks, deafening boom, screeching wails
I remember of dust blown, ashes burnt and tears wept.
I remember of the heavy rain, drizzle becomes pouring shower.
I remember of the hardship endured by my heart, by our plant in harsh weather
I remember of the thunder and the fire.
I remember of our plants...withered...
Dear Mister,
I remember of us.
I remember of the pure white rose.
I remember of you.
I remember of the spilled blood.
I remember of love.
I remember of the exhilarating passion
I remember of what I was
I think of a red rose...
Dear Mister,
Love me, please...? Even if I am no more our pristine white rose.
Dear beloved,
You are my chaste red rose, my love.
~End~
(Dedicated to Honda Kiku, Japan, in APH-DJ, ' Haikei, Ogenki Desu ka')
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Oo~okay, this is the 2nd version after I sort out my thought much clearer and well...basically it is still the same, just a bit longer and more descriptive. So... happy reading ^.^
PS: I like this version better actually -.-;


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